docs: copy-edit pass over dashboard, SSO, iOS and integrations pages - #34
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One-off grammar and punctuation slips, mostly on older pages the recent
revamp did not touch. No semantic changes.
dashboard/accounts/2fa.md, dashboard/search.md
Four you/your mix-ups ("Open you app", "you authentication
application", "persist you search criteria" x2), plus missing
articles and prepositions on search.md ("Provide meaningful name",
'click "Save" in the right side', "As you may guessed", "clicking at
the trash icon", "click at star icon").
SSO instruction pages
JumpCloud: italic markers placed inside the closing quote
(_"IDP Entity ID_" -> _"IDP Entity ID"_, and the same for
"Sign assertion" and "Fields Map"); "must match to the values" ->
"must match the values"; doubled verb in "is, on the contrary, is
checked".
Azure: "Navigate to your Azure." -> "your Azure portal."
AWS: stray space inside a quoted UI string; "the rest fields" ->
"the remaining fields".
iOS SDK
"and recording everything" -> ", recording everything";
"Do no trigger upload" -> "Do not trigger upload" (x2, in a warning
comment); "prevent some data of being collected" -> "from being";
"To cleanup up those, use corresponding API" -> "To clean those up,
use the corresponding API".
Android
"Stops Bugsee being added to build variants" -> "Prevents Bugsee from
being added to build variants".
Integrations
"Mostly integration flows have similar steps sequence" -> "Most
integration flows have a similar sequence of steps"; "We do not apply
any limitations to both username and password" -> "We impose no
restrictions on username or password"; "when is set in recipe result"
-> "when it is set in the recipe result"; "unified ... to the ones
being used" -> "with the ones used"; "Note, that result is not used as
is." -> "Note that the result is not used as-is."
index.md
"Installing React Native Module" -> "Installing React Native SDK" —
the only entry in the list not saying "SDK".
Deliberately not touched: the JumpCloud instruction to fill in the
"IdP-initiated URL" only to force "SP-initiated" SSO. That reads
backwards, but confirming the intended direction needs someone with
JumpCloud console access. Only the unambiguous formatting problems on
that line are fixed here.
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One-off grammar and punctuation slips — no semantic changes. These cluster on the older pages (dashboard, SSO, integrations) that the recent revamp did not reach.
By area
Dashboard — four
you/yourmix-ups ("Open you app", "you authentication application", "persist you search criteria" ×2), plus missing articles and prepositions onsearch.md: "Provide meaningful name", "click 'Save' in the right side", "As you may guessed", "clicking at the trash icon", "click at star icon".SSO instructions — JumpCloud had italic markers placed inside the closing quote (
_"IDP Entity ID_"→_"IDP Entity ID"_), which renders a stray_; the correctly-formatted_"SP Entity ID"_on the same line settled the direction. Same on "Sign assertion" and "Fields Map". Also "must match to the values" and a doubled verb: "is, on the contrary, is checked". Azure: "Navigate to your Azure." → "your Azure portal." AWS: stray space in a quoted UI string, and "the rest fields" → "the remaining fields".iOS — "and recording everything", "Do no trigger upload" ×2 (worth fixing since it is phrased as a warning), "prevent some data of being collected", "To cleanup up those, use corresponding API".
Android — "Stops Bugsee being added to build variants" → "Prevents Bugsee from being added…".
Integrations — "Mostly integration flows have similar steps sequence", "We do not apply any limitations to both username and password", "what format they expect when is set in recipe result", "unified … to the ones being used", "Note, that result is not used as is."
index.md— "Installing React Native Module" → "SDK".Conflict resolution carried forward
config-aws.md:38is one sentence carrying three separate fixes, split across two sides: already-merged #27 suppliedattribute namesandthe Bugsee, this PR suppliesremaining fields. All three are kept, and each was verified independently after the cherry-pick.Deliberately NOT fixed
config-jumpcloud.md:36says to fill in the "IdP-initiated URL" only if you want to force the "SP-initiated authentication SSO". That reads backwards — but confirming the direction needs someone who can open the JumpCloud console. I fixed only the unambiguous formatting on that line and left the instruction alone.Also left: "controlling entities" in
recipes_issues.mdx:156probably means "control characters", but I am not confident enough about the escaping behaviour being described to rewrite it.Checks
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